So it’s been almost a year since the last post. Since then, my life had become  a frantic race to “finish” the film in time for the De Anza College Student Film and Video Show, which took place this past June. As of right now, it sits in a sort of’limbo as I deliberate on where to go next with it. The goal is to make it to some of the more prestigious international animation festivals, and I’ve received both positive feedback and suggestions about making the film stronger in order to compete with student entries from the higher-profile schools. I’m still trying to figure out what that entails; trying to find a balance between working to finally putting this project behind me, while preparing myself for the apparently desperate struggle that is finding a job in the entertainment industry.

And so it might be a little longer before people outside of the De Anza College community are able to lay their eyes on it. In the mean time, here’s a trailer for ‘The Turtle and the Monkey’ … the De Anza Film Finals Cut. Many thanks to my composer, Dolores Duran-Cefalu, for the awesome Southeast-Asian inspired score

It’s bi-monthly update time!

I’ve actually been meaning to update the blog more frequently. At this point, I’m mostly working on revising and smoothing out longer shot sequences. In other words, cleaning up after myself as a result of the mostly scattershot, scatterbrained way I’ve been approaching the film up to now.

I’ve posted shots from this particular sequence before, but I ended up revising a lot of it after seeing in context with the rest of scene 3. I got comments about the readability of Turtle’s gestures and some confusion about Monkey’s emotional state, so I ended up adjusting those shots as well as adding more footage to lengthen the sequence a bit since it’s kinda, y’know, pivotal.

The aspect ratio might be a little off. But, whatever.

Shot Sequence 3-09 – 3-15 from Leo Aquino on Vimeo.

Rather than creating all new paintings, my approach was to take single frames from already-animated footage that I felt best represented a particular scene. The goal was to figure out how to best adjust the color scheme of each character according to the scene’s lighting conditions while getting an idea of how the final film might look.

Let’s start with Scene 3. I’m including the original screen from Toon Boom Studio for reference. If you’ve seen the line tests before, it’s kind of a shock to see them put into context:

Shot 3-09 line test

I had originally wanted the characters to look overexposed and contrasty like the environments here, but lightening Turtle any more here makes him the same color as the ground.

On to Scene 4. Here’s the first part of the scene:

After doing some research, it came as kind of relief to learn that tail-less monkeys exist in Southeast Asia. I’m still mulling over whether to include the tail. It could potentially be a nice way of accentuating Monkey’s emotions. It could also be a pain to animate. Anyway,  the latter part of the scene:

None of this is final, by the way. I’m thinking of testing out some simpler environments and color schemes before I’m done, but I’d love to get some opinions. What works or doesn’t work?

Update:

I received a few comments about a lack of clear focal points in some of the previously posted art. It was something that I noticed too as I was working on them. The area where I saw the biggest problem was in the bamboo spikes, which tend to blend into the grass. I tried to remedy this by placing a transparent “haze” layer over the background elements to dull them, and outlines around the spikes themselves. While that works up close, take a few steps back and it’s all just kind of a pond of green. Here are few revisions after taking some of the suggestions into account:

A little more than a year-and-a-half into production, I’m finally getting around to this stage of visual development. In most cases, figuring out the look of the environment and color studies/scripts probably would have been done to a certain degree by this stage in production. My excuse? A year ago, I didn’t even know how to paint. I’m focusing right now on the environment for scenes 3 & 4. About 60 – 70% of the film takes place in this location. I figured that it’s probably a good idea to try to settle on something here.

My first attempt was with Corel Painter X’s digital watercolor tools, hoping that I’d get something similar to what you see in Disney’s The Jungle Book:

Scene 3 - Corel Painter Digital Watercolor

Peep that broccoli shaped bamboo!

Yeah … let’s pretend that the previous picture doesn’t exist. I moved to Painter’s ‘oil’ tools for the subsequent paintings. Here’s another take on Scene 3:

Scene 3 - normal daylight

Scene 3 - normal daylight

Better … it’s simple and I think it conveys humidity fairly well. But if you look at the last line test I posted (2-03, which takes place at around this time of day), the characters appear hungry and worn down. Perhaps the environment should look antagonizing as well:

The heat ... it burnssss me

The heat ... it burnssss me

Scene 4 takes place several hours later, just as the sun is beginning to set:

Nothing refreshes like bamboo spikes in the late afternoon ...

Nothing refreshes like bamboo spikes in the late afternoon ...

… and the latter part of Scene 4 takes place at dusk. Keep in mind that I don’t know quite know what I’m doing, which is why I had to do it thrice.

First attempt ... maybe a little too yellow and muddy?

First attempt ... perhaps a little too yellow and muddy?

Second attempt - cooler shadows. I think the contrast is better here.

Second attempt - cooler shadows. I think the contrast is better here.

Third attempt - slight adjustment to the haze layer Ive got covering the background.

Third attempt - slight adjustment to the "haze" layer I've got covering the background.

The next step is to get the characters into the scene to see how they mesh with the environment and to settle on their corresponding color schemes. I get the feeling that I haven’t quite reached the final designs yet.

Shot 2-03 from Leo Aquino on Vimeo.

So monkey and tortoise are tired, hungry, and have been walking, walking … and walking. Enter butterfly!

Shot 1-19C linetest from Leo Aquino on Vimeo.

Ugh, the agony …

Though it probably doesn’t look like much, this might be the most challenging shot I’ve faced up to this point – the culprit being the tortoise’s step back and fall. Three weeks and 3-4 seconds of scrapped animation later, and I’m still not sure that it looks quite right. I want it to look like he’s struggling with the weight of his shell. Sometimes it looks like that, and other times I think it looks like he’s sinking in quicksand.

Line tests for shots 4-25 – 4-28

Tortoise & Monkey Line Test – Shots 4-25 – 4.28 from Leo Aquino on Vimeo.

line test – shot 3-6

Tortoise & Monkey Line Test – Shot 3-6 from Leo Aquino on Vimeo.

I happened upon these alternate … uh, visual re-tellings of the story while scouting potential video hosts.

… ah, yes. The monkey must pay for his insolence.

line tests – shots 3-15 – 3-18

Tortoise & Monkey Line Tests – Shots 3-15 – 3-18 from Leo Aquino on Vimeo.

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